Tuesday, July 12, 2011

Opinions on a short opening to a story?

I loved it. It was full of detail, which I personally think is important in a good story. And you have a perfect amount of it. Love the rhetorical question for the opening, I think that makes the reader want to keep on reading and find out the answer. It seems quite dark and morbid, which I assume is what you were going for? If so then you did a very good job. Keep going with this, it's captivating.

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